Written Among The Stars

Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest and thoughtful review.Don’t let a three star rating fool you, I enjoyed this book a lot. The story was good, the characters were solid, the structuring was all good. Unfortunately, the book had some issues that I couldn’t quite get past and this effected the overall rating that I gave it. So let’s go through this point by point.When I look back on the synopsis of this book in hindsight, it confuses me a little. Yes, this book was about Abby and her journey to Kipos and a new life in this “utopia” she was presented. The synopsis would have you believe that this was the whole of the story. But in reality this discovery and journey was really only about 1/3 of the book. The rest hardly touched on this at all and so the synopsis didn’t apply that much to the majority of the book. The story I got was good, but it was far different than the story I expected. What I got was a story of perseverance, daring, courage, and having the strength to make something better out of your circumstances. This was a great story and I wish it was closer to what I had been pitched!Now, the rest of this may be a bit spoiler heavy, so consider yourself warned. There was an event that takes place on Kipos that was supposed to be heavily emotional and increase my empathy for Abby. Mostly it horrified me, but then confused me. So basically Abby is raped in order to have her conceive a child. Now, this is awful and horrifying. But Abby’s reaction to this event really puzzled me. She displayed no knowledge or understanding of her body or sex at all. When her hymen is perforated, she thinks they are performing surgery on her. She seems to have no idea what’s going on with her body or how sex functions. But then later she starts having sexual fantasies about her guards and masturbating. Um, that doesn’t really make sense to me. Yes, I realize some girls become sexually promiscuous after a rape to take their power back, but she had never masturbated before and didn’t seem to understand sex at all so this move was confusing. She also shows extreme naivety about her pregnancy, such as thinking that she is going to be raising this baby and allowed to be a mother to it. Also, she doesn’t seem to have any ambivalence about the baby which is very common for babies conceived through rape.Alright, enough about that, let’s move on to the next part. I really loved Abby’s interaction with the crew of the Revelation. I loved that she found her place and discovered something that she really enjoyed doing. The characters were excellent and their interactions made me really interested to see what would happen. The only thing that bothered me about this whole section was Abby. She never thought to talk to anyone about anything before she came to a conclusion about their behavior and instead just decided that her conclusion was right and acted accordingly. This alienated her from her companions and served to alienate me from them as well.My last tiny little gripes, I promise. Some of the more scientific aspects of this book confused the hell out of me. I consider myself to be reasonably intelligent, but 2 relative weeks, 3 relative months, tachyon engine this, it just made my eyes cross. The only way I knew how much time had passed is by looking at the dates at the beginning of the chapters. Otherwise, I was clueless. Also the ending of the book was rather anti-climactic. The author built up some amazing tension in the plot for many chapters, and then when we got to that moment it was just…..over. There was minimal drama and it was resolved within a few pages. That was a bit disappointing. But the ending after that was excellent and well planned out. Abby may not have found her utopia on Kipos, but she did find it by the end of the book. Overall I enjoyed this book a lot but there were a handful of things that prevented me from truly loving it as much as I could have. But it is a fun read and I would encourage anyone who’s a fan of the sci-fi genre to read it, and new fans to the genre should give it a try.Read this and other great reviews at my blog Stefani's World of Words